Writing task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.
It is often people argue that
shools
should Correct your spelling
schools
to
teach children how to be a good Change the verb form
apply
perent
. I agree that learning about motherhood or fatherhood is important Correct your spelling
parents
in
these days.Change preposition
apply
Kids
can learn and gain skills
such
as responsibility
and nuture
babies.
I completely agree Correct your spelling
nurture
with
children must Change preposition
that
learning
about how to be a good Wrong verb form
learn
parent
. kids
in
Change preposition
at
this
age have the capacity to learning
about motherhood and fatherhood. Wrong verb form
learn
Also
, they care about their dolls so this
a
green flag is Correct article usage
apply
give
Wrong verb form
given
us
to Change preposition
to us
starting
teach them. Add the particle
starting to
For example
, a study at Harvard University shows that,
young people have more ability to Remove the comma
apply
learning
and gain knowledge about how to be a good Wrong verb form
learn
parent
rather than adults. Childhood is the best period to learning
about how to be a good Wrong verb form
learn
parent
.
There are many skills
a
individual Change the article
an
need
to be a good Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
parent
. Firstly
, attention to details
because you care for babies they can not speak or explain what they want, so you need to understand their memic. Fix the agreement mistake
detail
Secondly
, you must have
Verb problem
take
the
Correct article usage
apply
responsibility
for your actions with them. For instance
, when I was young I have
no idea about the Wrong verb form
had
dengerous
of fire, so I just started Correct your spelling
danger
playin
in the oven and Correct your spelling
playing
playin'
accidently
I Correct your spelling
accidentally
play
Wrong verb form
played
the
fair, my mother Change the article
apply
take
Wrong verb form
took
the
Correct article usage
apply
responsibility
of
my Change preposition
for
action
, Fix the agreement mistake
actions
beacause
I were not aware. Correct your spelling
because
In
Change preposition
At
these
Change the determiner
this age
these ages
age
you can teach Add a comma
age,
kids
a lot of skills
because the
will be willing to Correct your spelling
they
learning
.
Wrong verb form
learn
To sum up
, I agree we should teach kids
about how to be a good parent
in childhood. Children in
Change preposition
at
young
age have the capacity to gain Add an article
a young
skills
such
as attention for
Change preposition
to
details
and Fix the agreement mistake
detail
responsibility
.Submitted by reem.b.albalawi on
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task achievement
To improve task achievement, provide more detailed examples and explain your points further. This will make your essay more persuasive and comprehensive.
coherence cohesion
Work on the logical flow of your paragraphs. Ensure each idea logically follows the previous one to improve coherence and cohesion. Use linking words and phrases effectively.
grammar
Double-check your essay for grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. This will enhance clarity and make your points more coherent.
task achievement
Your essay's main points are relevant to the topic and clearly stated.
task achievement
You have made a strong attempt to address the topic and support your points with examples.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your key points and restates your position.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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