Rates of diabetes and obesity are increasing in many countries around the world. Some people think that the government should ban soft drinks and sugary snacks from schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this proposal?

Nowadays a number of people believe that the government should avoid unhealthy

snacks

from

the

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schools

, like soft drinks and sugary

snacks

. As the way I see it, the powers that be should

forbide

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forbid

forbids

forbade

this

kind

of

meals

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meal

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in

schools

. In

this

essay

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we will discuss why sugar can be bad for

kids

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kids'

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health, and why selling

this

type of

snacks

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snack

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in

schools

can create a bad

habbit

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habit

for

the

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minors.

Firstly

, huge

cuantities

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quantities

of sugar can

interfect

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intersect

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interject

with the

students

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student's

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healt

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health

.

This

is because, when

some one

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someone

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eats

lost

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lots

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of

cadyes

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cadres

dyes

, their glucose levels highs up and

this

can

lay

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lead

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to several diseases like diabetes and obesity, making them less active and decreasing their health.

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, in the USA kids

eats

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lost

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lots

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of sweets causing them to have a higher risk of diabetes and obesity than

the

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juveniles that do not eat that much sugar. Eating

than

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that

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kind

of unhealthy food can decrease the

minors

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minor's

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health and

get

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cause

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a number of diseases.

Secondly

, having

this

kind

of

snacks

in the school can make the students develop bad alimentary

habbits

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habits

causing them to have a poor diet in the future.

This

is because some parents do not have enough time to make healthy meals, or even to teach their kids how to make them. In my own experience, when I was younger, I used to eat a healthier diet than my brother, who only

eated

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ate

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chocolate and sweets,

now a days

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nowadays

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I am able to prepare myself more healthy food and stay more active,

while

he needs to buy all his food from the supermarket because he never had the

habbit

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habit

of eating greens.

To conclude

, is important that the government takes action in the

schools

to avoid

that

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kind

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kinds

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of unhealthy

snacks

in order to keep the juveniles

more

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healthy.