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46.The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

46.The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
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graph
 illustrates producing of
waste
 in different countries ( Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland, Portugal, and the USA) in three periods ( 1980, 1990, and 2000),
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are
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measured in million tonnes.
Overall
, the
amount
 of
waste
 production increased in all countries over the entire period, except Korea which decreased. The most significant feature in the USA
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 number of
waste
 production was the highest throughout the years. In
US
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the US
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, people produced
waste
 about 131 in 1980, which was more than
any
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 other
countries
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, and
then
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increased
 to 192 in the
last
 year.
Simirlarly
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Similarly
, in Japan , there was the second highest
amount
 of trash at 28 in the first year, and rose to about doubled in 2000.
Korean
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amount
 of produced
waste
 was 31, before dropping to 19 in 2000.
On the other hand
,
Ierland
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Ireland
 was the lowest
amount
 of generation
waste
 exactly 0.6 in 1980, with no data in 1990, after
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 surged to 5 in 2000,
likewise
, Portugal, which started at 2 and reached 5 in the final year.
Furthermore
, Poland's
waste
 was
realtively
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relatively
 stable between 4 to 6.6.
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