The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of sodium, saturated fats, and added sugars, all of which may unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts display the percentage of regular meals of sodium, saturated fats, and added sugars, which are considered
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for
people's health when consumed too much.
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Overall
, breakfast
has the lowest amount
of all three unhealthy ingredients whilst dinner
and snacks
are both threathening
the life of Correct your spelling
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beings.
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breakfast
and snacks
have the same percentage of sodium with 14%, whilst lunch includes more than double with 29%. Dinner
has the highest amount
of sodium with 43%, which is more than triple of
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that of
breakfast
and snacks
.
Secondly
, breakfast
includes the lowest amount
of saturated fats with 16%. Snacks
and lunch are following
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including
21% and 26% respectively. Verb problem
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However
, dinner
has dramatically
higher percentage of Add an article
a dramatically
having
saturated fats with 37%.
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On the other hand
, snacks
includes
42% of added sugar, which is almost double of Change the verb form
include
dinner
has. Breakfast
and lunch include almost the same amount
of added sugar which are
16% and 19% respectively.Correct subject-verb agreement
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