Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcylces are banned from city center. People are encouraged to use public transports such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free day. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweighs the disadvantages?
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Nowadays, we are facing many environmental issues like global warming. There are a number of contributing factors behind it,
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, it will be fruitful if we reduce the number of private motorcades running on the roads on certain days and use public transport to commute. In my viewpoint
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