The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
The diagram illustrates the variation in the manufacturing of three dominant combustibles in the UK, over a period of time from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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the three combustibles, two kinds of them, Petroleum and Natural Gas, have increased during the two decades, and only one – Coal – has a drastic fall, from 80 Energy Units to 35 Energy Units. Apparently, Petroleum is the main type of combustible produced from 1981 with a peak of 140 Change preposition
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in 1986, followed by a decrease until
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in 1990. After that, in 1991 the production
of Petroleum increased up
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in 1999, with a slight decrease to 140 EU
in 2000.
On the other hand
, the manufacture of Natural gas had a stable production
of 40 EU
until 1990. After that, the manufacture grew to 100 EU
in 2000.
In conclusion, the production
of all three types of fuels had
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period of time. Two of them have increased the production
of combustibles, and only one has decreased its production
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