The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the table illustrates the immigrant
workers
in temporary
over Add an article
the temporary
a temporary
period
Correct article usage
a period
in
3 Change preposition
of
year
from 2003 until 2006, and the Change to a plural noun
years
number
of workers
per 1000 people in 2006 divided into four countries namely Australia, New Zealand
, the United kingdom
and the Capitalize word
Kingdom
usa
.
Correct your spelling
USA
overall
, it can be seen that the highest migrant workers
in 2003 was
Change the verb form
were
the
Change preposition
in the
united states
of Correct your spelling
United States
america
, and the lowest was Change the capitalization
America
Change preposition
in new
new
Correct your spelling
New Zealand
zealand
, while
in 2006 still remain the highest was the
Change preposition
in the
USA
. Meanwhile, the number
of workers
per 1,000 people in 2016 the biggest workers
was
Change the verb form
were
Change preposition
in new
new
Correct your spelling
New Zealand
zealand
, and the lowest was the
Change preposition
in the
united states
.
In Correct your spelling
United States
details
, in 2003 the Fix the agreement mistake
detail
USA
migrant workers
was 577,000 and increased in 2006 around
678,000, Change preposition
to around
following
by Australia was 152,000 migrant Wrong verb form
followed
workers
and slightly increase
in 2006 Wrong verb form
increased
about
219,000 Change preposition
to about
workers
, besides
that, the united kingdom
was 137,000 Correct your spelling
United Kingdom
migran
Correct your spelling
migrant
workers
and rised
around 266,000 in 2006, and the lowest temporary migrant Correct your spelling
raised
rise
rose
workers
was new zealand
about 65,000 and uplifted around 87,000 in 2006.
Moreover
, the number
of
per 1000 people in 2006, the biggest was Change preposition
apply
new
Correct your spelling
New Zealand
zealand
with number
21,1, followed by australia
around 10,7 and the Change the capitalization
Australia
united
Capitalize word
United
kingom
and the Correct your spelling
Kingdom
usa
around 4,4 and 2,4 respectively.Correct your spelling
USA
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