The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs present the
percentage
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change
compared with the previous Use synonyms
month
of three metal prices covering all months in 2014.
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Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
nickel
had the greatest Use synonyms
change
in Use synonyms
percentage
, comparing the beginning to the Use synonyms
end
of the Use synonyms
year
, Use synonyms
while
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copper
showed a minimal Use synonyms
change
. Zinc is the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
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change
in price in the first Use synonyms
month
and ends at the highest Use synonyms
percentage
.
In January, Use synonyms
Nickel
started with a positive 6% Use synonyms
change
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experienced a substantial dropping to the lowest point at minus 3% Linking Words
change
in June before rising to a positive 1% Use synonyms
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at the
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end
of the Use synonyms
year
, with a minimal decrease in October. Use synonyms
However
, Zinc began at relatively lower with a positive 1% Linking Words
change
and increased to a positive 3% Use synonyms
change
in the next Use synonyms
month
, and Use synonyms
then
fell to a minus 1 % Linking Words
change
in June. After that, in the next four months, its figure saw a dramatic incline to a positive 2% Use synonyms
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at the
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end
of the given period. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
Copper
remained constant at approximately 2% with some fluctuation throughout the Use synonyms
year
.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
percentage
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change
in price compared with the previous Use synonyms
month
,Use synonyms
nickel
had the largest negative Use synonyms
change
in Use synonyms
percentage
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In contrast
, Linking Words
copper
increased significantly surpassing the Use synonyms
nickel
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at the
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end
of the Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
While
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,
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apply
copper
remained steady during the given period.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, change, month, nickel, end, year, copper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 13 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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