The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs present the
percentage
change
compared with the previous month
of three metal prices covering all months in 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that nickel
had the greatest change
in percentage
, comparing the beginning to the end
of the year
, while
copper
showed a minimal change
. Zinc is the lowest percentage
change
in price in the first month
and ends at the highest percentage
.
In January, Nickel
started with a positive 6% change
and then
experienced a substantial dropping to the lowest point at minus 3% change
in June before rising to a positive 1% change
at the
end
of the year
, with a minimal decrease in October. However
, Zinc began at relatively lower with a positive 1% change
and increased to a positive 3% change
in the next month
, and then
fell to a minus 1 % change
in June. After that, in the next four months, its figure saw a dramatic incline to a positive 2% change
at the
end
of the given period. However
, Copper
remained constant at approximately 2% with some fluctuation throughout the year
.
In conclusion, the percentage
change
in price compared with the previous month
,nickel
had the largest negative change
in percentage
. In contrast
, copper
increased significantly surpassing the nickel
at the
end
of the year
. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
copper
remained steady during the given period.Submitted by sippakorn.wet on
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