Task 1 The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999

The line graph

illustreres

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illustrates

illustrious

visitors to and from

british

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Britain

between 1979 to 1999.

while

the bar chart gives information about the most famous nations visited by

british

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residents

in 1999.

overall

, it is clear from the bar graph that

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France topped the

countires

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countries

visited by

UK

sidents

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residents

in 1999 ,

while

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Turkey was the lowest

country

. The number of

visits

abroad by

UK

residents

increased sharply over the given period .

However

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the

amount

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number

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of

visits

to the

UK

by overseas

residents

go

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up gradually. The number of people who

visits

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abroad by

UK

residents

in 1979 increased from around 14

millions

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to exactly 20

millions

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million

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.

Then

after 1984 it

rised

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rose

raised

rises

quickly to more than 50

millions

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million

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. In 1979 the

visits

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number of visits

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to the

UK

by overseas

residents

were 10

millions

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million

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, and it

go

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went

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up gradually over

the

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time until it

reach

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reached

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to

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around 28

millions

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million

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. The

most

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Popular

Country

visited was more than 10 million it was

millions

of

UK

visitors. In the second top

country

was

spain

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Spain

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and it was less than 10

millions

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million

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.

In contrast

,

USA

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the USA

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and Greece

were

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had

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nearly 4 to 5

millions

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million

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of

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UK

visitors respectively. In 1999 the lowest

country

where visited by

UK

residents

was Turkey.