The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
visitors
travelled to a particular Caribbean island
and stayed on cruise
ships or on island
itself during the course of 7 Add an article
the island
years
, commencing from 2010.
Overall
, the number
of total tourists
experienced an increase throughout the years
. Cruise
ships eventually rose starting from
2012 Change preposition
in
while
the trend
of staying on island
saw fluctuations over the Add an article
the island
years
.
From 2010 to 2012, the total number
of tourists
saw a gradual climb, increasing in
50% of its value. In the same time period, Change preposition
by
visitors
who prefers
staying on Change the verb form
prefer
island
remained unchanged until 2011, and Add an article
the island
then
it had the same trend
as the the
total Remove the redundancy
apply
number
of visitors
, reaching nearly 1.2 millions
. Change to singular
million
However
, the number
of individuals on cruise
experienced a slight upward trend
following the downward trend
, so basically its values in 2010 and 2012 are the same: approximately 250 thousands
.
Change to singular
thousand
Nevertheless
, it had a
considerable growth and Correct article usage
apply
reach
its peak in 2017, maintaining Wrong verb form
reached
for
2 Change preposition
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
tourists
, which resembles the trend
of the total number
of the
Caribbean Correct article usage
apply
tourists
, that
Correct pronoun usage
which
hitted
its high in 2017, accounting for Correct your spelling
hit
the
index of 3.5 Correct article usage
an
millions
. In Change to singular
million
the
contrast, Correct article usage
apply
visitors
staying on island
marginally went up to 1.5 Correct article usage
the island
millions
in 2013 and kept its plateau for 2 more Change to singular
million
years
. Next,
it experienced a dip, resulting in 1.5 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
people in 2017 that stayed on Change preposition
apply
island
. The numerical index of Add an article
the island
visitors
staying on cruise
ships and visitors
staying on island
leveled off between 2015 and 2016.Correct article usage
the island
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, cruise, years, number, tourists, trend, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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