The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The graphs illustrate the data
of
Change preposition
on
police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
in a specific city in the United Kingdom in two years 2017 and 2018, and the amount
of money they spent on three sectores
( salaries, technology, and building and transport). The units are measured in Correct your spelling
sectors
pound
.
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pounds
Overall
, the amount
of police
budget
increased gradually in national government and local taxes, while
other sources budget
remained stable. Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
Furthermore
, the highest amount
of money was spent on salaries, however
, the least amount
of expendture
was on technology.
The main source of Correct your spelling
expenditure
police
income was from national
government Add an article
the national
by
175,5 Change preposition
apply
millions
in 2017Change to singular
million
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
increased to 177,8 millions
. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, the local taxes was
the second highest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
amount
of police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
was
91.2 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
in the first year and rose to 102.3 Change to singular
million
millions
in the Change to singular
million
last
year. While
others
sources Correct quantifier usage
other
was
38 Change the verb form
were
millions
in both years.
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million
Police
spent most of the budget
on salaries nearly three quarter
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quarters
overall
in 2017, and then
dropped to 69% in 2018. However
, the least amount
of money was spent on technology with only 8% in 2017 and then
surged to 14% in 2018. Building and transport took only 17% of the budget
throughout the period.Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, amount, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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