The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The graphs illustrate the data
of
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police
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the police
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budget
in a specific city in the United Kingdom in two years 2017 and 2018, and the
amount
of money they spent on three
sectores
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sectors
( salaries, technology, and building and transport). The units are measured in
pound
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pounds
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.
Overall
, the
amount
of
police
budget
increased gradually in national government and local taxes,
while
other sources
budget
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budgets
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remained stable.
Furthermore
, the highest
amount
of money was spent on salaries,
however
, the least
amount
of
expendture
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expenditure
was on technology. The main source of
police
income was from
national
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the national
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government
by
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175,5
millions
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million
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in 2017
,
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and
then
increased to 177,8
millions
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million
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.
Moreover
, the local taxes
was
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the second highest
amount
of
police
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the police
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budget
was
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91.2
millions
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million
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in the first year and rose to 102.3
millions
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million
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in the
last
year.
While
others
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other
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sources
was
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38
millions
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million
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in both years.
Police
spent most of the
budget
on salaries nearly three
quarter
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quarters
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overall
in 2017, and
then
dropped to 69% in 2018.
However
, the least
amount
of money was spent on technology with only 8% in 2017 and
then
surged to 14% in 2018. Building and transport took only 17% of the
budget
throughout the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, amount, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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