The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the
amount
of wheat
exports in various countries between 1985 to 1990 . It is clear from the graph that Canada reached the highest amount
of whet
export during a specific period .Correct your spelling
wheat
According to
what is shown , in 1985 the Average amount
of wheat
transferred climbed to 20 tone then
dramatically decreased to 16 tones
nearly in the next 2 year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
the
Capitalize word
The
wheat
export sharply increased to 25 in 1998 ,in
the following year returned to the lowest level which was 14 Correct word choice
and in
tones
and climbed to 18 tones
in 1990 . On the other hand
, in 1995 the value of wheat
exports in the European community was 16 tones
which decreased to 14 tones
in 1986 however
in the next five year
the Fix the agreement mistake
years
amount
of wheat
export flustated
.In Correct your spelling
frustrated
Australia
the Add a comma
Australia,
amount
of wheat
remained stable and slightly rockted to 16tones in 1986 Abd
Correct your spelling
And
fall
to 14 in 1990.Replace the word
fell
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