The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the
amount
of
wheat
exports in various countries between 1985 to 1990 . It is clear from the graph that Canada reached the highest
amount
of
whet
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wheat
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export during a specific period .
According to
what is shown , in 1985 the Average
amount
of
wheat
transferred climbed to 20 tone
then
dramatically decreased to 16
tones
nearly in the next 2
year
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years
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the
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The
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wheat
export sharply increased to 25 in 1998 ,
in
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and in
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the following year returned to the lowest level which was 14
tones
and climbed to 18
tones
in 1990 .
On the other hand
, in 1995 the value of
wheat
exports in the European community was 16
tones
which decreased to 14
tones
in 1986
however
in the next five
year
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years
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the
amount
of
wheat
export
flustated
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frustrated
.In
Australia
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Australia,
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the
amount
of
wheat
remained stable and slightly rockted to 16tones in 1986
Abd
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And
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fall
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to 14 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, wheat, tones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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