The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows information about the
percentage
of citizens purchasing and consuming tea and
coffee
habits in five Australian cities.
Overall
, almost all the cities showed a higher
percentage
of going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea compared to other habits.
Whereas
,
residents
in Adelaide had a closer
percentage
in
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having the habit of getting instant
coffee
and going to a cafe.
This
is followed by
residents
who showed the habits of buying fresh
coffee
which depicted the lowest
percentage
among all cities. Melbourne had the highest
percentage
of locals who drank
coffee
or tea in a cafe at about 64% and Hobart was just 1% away from reaching the same
percentage
.
This
is followed by Sydney with 3% difference at 61%. Adelaide,
however
, had a close
percentage
of locals who bought instant
coffee
at around 49% with locals who bought fresh
coffee
at 50%. But
afterall
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after all
, Hobart had the most
residents
who bought instant
coffee
at around 54%.
In contrast
, citizens from Brisbane and Adelaide
bought
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fresh
coffee
had a similar
percentage
at about 34%.
This
habit is followed by Hobart’s
residents
with a rough
percentage
of 37%.
However
, the city which had the most
residents
who picked up
this
habit is Sydney,
reached
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at
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44%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee, residents with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • buying and drinking habits
  • percentage
  • fresh coffee
  • instant coffee
  • consumption trends
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • notable
  • speculate
  • features
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