The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the
percentage
of citizens purchasing and consuming Use synonyms
tea
and Use synonyms
coffee
habits during the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks in five Australian cities.
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Overall
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it is clear that
having a Linking Words
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in a cafe was the most common habit, except in Use synonyms
Adelaide
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Additionally
, the Linking Words
percentage
of residents purchasing instant Use synonyms
coffee
was always higher than that of those buying fresh Use synonyms
coffee
in all cities.
Looking at Sydney and Melbourne, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
percentage
of Sydney’s people drinking Use synonyms
tea
or Use synonyms
coffee
at a cafe was about 61%, the figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at around 63%. Meanwhile, more than 45% of citizens in Sydney and Melbourne had a habit of purchasing instant Use synonyms
coffee
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whereas
the amount of those buying fresh Linking Words
coffee
in these two cities Use synonyms
were
around 44% and 43% respectively.
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was
In contrast
, consuming Linking Words
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
at a cafe accounted for the largest Use synonyms
percentage
of people in Hobart, followed by Brisbane and Use synonyms
Adelaide
, at approximately 56% and 49% respectively. Use synonyms
Similarly
, around 53% of people in Brisbane and Hobart preferred to buy instant Linking Words
coffee
, compared to nearly 50% of those in Use synonyms
Adelaide
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Finally
, a close similarity can be seen in the Linking Words
percentage
of citizens buying fresh Use synonyms
coffee
in Brisbane and Use synonyms
Adelaide
, at around 34%, Use synonyms
whereas
Hobart’s figure was higher, at roughly 38%.Linking Words
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