Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is suggested that the collaboration between national investment

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the ticket price reduction scheme should effectively resolve the pressing environmental issue

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air pollution these days. I strongly agree with the statement that the support from the authorities in terms of financial aspects will tremendously reduce pollution in the air for several reasons.

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with, it

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sensible to believe that the government is supposed to allocate more of the nation's expenditures for a higher quality of life for its people. Take Japan,

for example

; It is known as one of the top-notch public

transport

system

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in the world where all trains are powered by magnetism which

create

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zero carbon emission. It is not only

environmentally-friendly

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, but

also

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at a high speed which

beneficial

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for several commuters during rush hours

as well as

its punctuality and availability of services. Since it

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not

using

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fuel or gases where

the

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incomplete combustion generally

happened

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, means that there will be no toxic fumes

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to

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the atmosphere.

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, a good quality of

transport

systems will be

such

a waste without loads of commuters to use it. In

this

sense, the price reduction is a very appealing offer that can be used to attract more users. Since almost 90% of the living expenses of

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low to

middle income

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citizens

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accounted for

traveling

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whether commuted by private car or with public

transports

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. There is no wonder why reducing ticket fees could possibly be a good strategy for them to opt for

this

choices

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than driving their own car.

Thailand

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,

for instance

, the public

transport

system

is not the best option for any area in the country, especially in

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remote places or even in subrural areas

nearby

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big

city

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. Having a private car is much more convenient and probably cheaper than

traveling

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with public

transports

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sometimes. In summary, I personally support that there are various benefits resulting from the

government

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monetary support

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public

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transport

system

either investment

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the

system

or

set

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a reasonable price that not only

helping

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us manage the threatening air pollution crisis but

also

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the quality of life of its people

too

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.