Some people think that in school discipline should be the job of teacher whereas some believe it is the parent's accountability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is widely known that

discipline

in

school

is a very important topic.

Children

, by nature, are very playful and need rules to prevent them from misbehaving.

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Nevertheless

, there are conflicting opinions on whether disciplining

children

is a teacher's or a

parent

's job. The time spent in schools and the role of parenting are pivotal points in

this

debate. Discussing both

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of

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,

as well as

analysing both arguments is necessary before arriving

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. It is agreed by many people that

discipline

in schools is the teachers' task.

Children

spend 7

hours

on average in class. During these

hours

, they are involved

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different activities which require good

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and order. Sadly, parents can not be involved in teaching students morals in these times and only teachers can accomplish

this

.

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,

this

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the argument that in

school

discipline

is a teacher's job.

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contrary

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, plenty of others believe in the opposite that it is the

parent

's accountability. It is the parents' role to teach their

children

morals and to prepare them for socializing with others.

furthermore

, parenting should

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taken place years before

children

come to

school

age. Jordan Peterson, a

well known

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phsychologist, claims that if you have not prepared your child for socializing and have not taught him manners and

discipline

by the age of four,

then

you would have failed as a

parent

. Teachers can not participate in

this

for preschool

children

.

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, Many abide

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that it is a

parent

's task.

To conclude

,

although

it is

univeraly

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universally

agreed that disciplining

children

is important, yet many disagree on whose responsibility

this

is. The fact that kids

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many

hours

daily in schools

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and the fact about the best timing for the initiation of teaching were used by both groups to support their claims. I personally think that

discipline

is a parents' task.

However

, collaboration in and out of

school

hours

will

yeild

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yield

the best results.