The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates details about the
number
of car
owner
in Fix the agreement mistake
owners
Britian
from 1971 to 2007. Correct your spelling
Britain
Overall
, the rates
of Fix the agreement mistake
rate
people
using one car
was the largest and the lowest percentage belongs to number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
possess
three or more cars over the years in the UK.
In 1971, there was almost 50% of Wrong verb form
possessing
people
who have no car
, which was decrease
Change the verb form
decreased
drammatically
to just around 25% in 2007. Correct your spelling
dramatically
In contrast
, the number
of people
owning two cars quickly rose at the same time, under
10% to approximately 26%.
It can be clearly seen that the Change preposition
from under
number
of people
owning one car
occupy the highest rate in the UK 1975
, over 43%, which Change preposition
in 1975
then
gradually changed to 42%, meanwhile, the number
of Britian
Correct your spelling
British
people
owning three or more cars increase
slowly Wrong verb form
increased
over
the time from 1971 to 2007, about 2% to 7%.Change preposition
apply
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