It is notable that many
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are relentlessly striving to achieve
success
in
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field
such
as career, education, wealth or health, at some point in their
life
, others argue that we
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all value
success
differently based on cultures and experiences that influence our attitude toward it.
Hence
, I personally believe that
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ability to do
things
you dreamed of is the biggest achievement.
To begin
with, it seems sensible for us that
success
can be viewed and defined alternatively as we are all nurtured from different cultures and may
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unique experiences. To simply explain, some
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may have to leave
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the education system at a very young age in order to
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a living and
this
might be the case that
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them
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to get a high academic level or
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employed in
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in order to pursue their dreams or for financial incentives,
while
others might
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about
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this aforementioned success
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success
and perhaps happy with
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like being able to live healthily, or being loved and supported with good companions, etc.
instead
. Take millionaires, for
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; though they are extremely wealthy, when it comes to health, there is no difference in sickness that some
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to live the rest of their
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without any illness.
However
, I personally argue in favour of my own definition of
success
, seeing that the power of doing
things
you want is the most valuable
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in
life
. From my experience,
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admittedly have
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financial or emotional support from my parents, without them I would never done
things
I wanted to in my
life
like being an exchange student during
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. Though
educationsFix the agreement mistake
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and career
success
isChange the verb form
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unarguably vital, the autonomy of doing desirable
things
is much more outstanding than the other two.
In a nutshell,
although
it is undeniable that people have different
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toward
success
due to
their past experiences or cultures, I am of the opinion that being able to do
things
you love is considered
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precious
remarksFix the agreement mistake
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for myself as a
success
.