The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates how to process cloning a
sheep
.
Overall
, there are six main stages, beginning of
cells Change preposition
with
taking
from different Wrong verb form
taken
sheep
and ending with the birth of cloned sheep
.
Firstly
, we need to prepare two different female sheep
which then
they categorized as A and B. Then
, body cell
and egg Fix the agreement mistake
cells
cell
are taken from the A Fix the agreement mistake
cells
sheep
and B sheep
respectively. Secondly
, DNA is extracted from the body cell
and the egg cell
is separated from its nucleus, then
, both of these processed cells are combined to
the next step.
Change preposition
for
Thirdly
, the egg cell
of B sheep
is inserted to
Change preposition
into
DNA
Correct article usage
the DNA
from
A Change preposition
of
sheep
. While
the cells are combined and become a
fused Correct article usage
apply
cell
, it grows into an embryo, which is the fourth step of the cloning process. Moving to the fifth stage, the embryo is planted in the uterus of Fix the agreement mistake
cells
foster
mother, Correct article usage
the foster
calling as
C Wrong verb form
called
sheep
. Finally
, the C sheep
gives birth to a lamb, which is genetic
clone of Add an article
a genetic
sheep
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sheep, cell with synonyms.
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