Nowadays in many countries, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender equality
  • Work-life balance
  • Harmonious relationship
  • Mental health
  • Gender stereotypes
  • Set a good example
  • Cooperate
  • Respectful partnership
  • Overburdened
  • Involvement
  • Household duties
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