The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph compares wheat that was internationally traded in three different countries between 1985 and 1990 .
Overall
, Wheat exported to Canada fluctuated broadly and witnessed its peak in 1988 reaching 25
Tons
then
dropped in 1989 to under 15
Tons
. Exporting to Australia decreased over the years from 15
Tons
to roughly over 10 by the year 1990 .
Secondly
, the European Community's exports declined from 15
Tons
in 1985 and kept falling back till they reached just over 10
Tons
in 1990 .
Lastly
, Canada showed the most unstable exporting line throughout those years . The exporting decreased to just under 15
Tons
in 1989
then
rose again in the next year to roughly 20
Tons
. The exporting process changed over time , but Canada showed huge changes during these years
while
Australia and
European
Correct article usage
the European
show examples
Community demonstrated a decrease and an increase respectively .
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