Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?

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some, the system where the

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study all

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at school has numerous advantages

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others are convinced

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the benefits of focusing on

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a specific subject

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only.

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undoubtedly useful information in all

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, I firmly believe that education should appreciate the choice of the

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, since it will increase the performance of the

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and the chance to focus on their future careers. Concentrating on the

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that

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choose themselves can influence their academic performance and

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engagement, increasing

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interest

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towards a specific field.

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, it will increase the success of the

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teenagers are given an opportunity to choose the classes, obviously, they prefer the ones they are best at or they are most interested in.

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, exploring the fields, that

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wants, often increases a motivation to study. Concentrating on all

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,

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, leads to the deterioration of the grades, which can cause

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significant stress. The

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in

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a specific subject

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subjects

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is usually linked to

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interest

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of young people. Indeed, they take courses that are relevant to their

desirable

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career. It means that the information teenagers absorb during the classes is necessary for their future professional development.

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, a person who wants to pursue a career in IT does not need profound

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in biology or need only superficially

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.

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reason, he or she won’t be interested in learning the detailed photosynthesis process happening in plants. Focusing on various

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not only forces young people to study processes unrelated to their field of

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but

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takes a tremendous time, which

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could be spent to learn relevant topics. In conclusion,

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system focusing on different areas can reduce the quality of

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and

interest

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, but specific area concentration benefits

students

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in a numerous way: it ameliorates their academic success and gives fundamental

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related to future

career

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. I am convinced that teenagers should take only interesting and impactful classes at school.