The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The
sales
of fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 is considerably lower in comparions
to 2004. The Correct your spelling
comparison
comparisons
UK
has lower stats compared to Switzerland
and it is shown that Swiss
has 2 times the scale than The Correct article usage
the Swiss
UK
, compared to the latest year it has shown that The UK
is gradually ahead of Switzerland
with the
ratio of 20:6 which is more than double. In general, Correct article usage
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Switzerland
has the highest stats in the
1999 and in the 2004 United Kingdom leads the pack with an astonishing Correct article usage
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sales
of 20 million of
Euros.
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The bananas
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Bananas
sales
is
considerably higher than coffee, with Swiss leading again in Change the verb form
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1999 and moving on to Correct article usage
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2004, Change the article
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Switzerland
is still leading in sales
, when compared
the stats of Wrong verb form
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Switzerland
in 1999 to 2004 has increased by more than 3 times. The bananas sales
is
quite low for Change the verb form
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Kingdom, but the progress it has made Correct article usage
the United
for
the past 5 years is quite amazing, in 2004 Change preposition
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than
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last
5 years. We can't even compare the sales
between Switzerland
and The UK
for this
matter, in 1999 Switzerland
was ahead of The UK
by a large margin and it is still the same way in 2004.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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