The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about the variation in
exports
of
wheat
above
Australia
,
Canada
and
European
communities. ‏
overall
, The
wheat
experts of
Australia
showed an increasing trend over the period.
However
,
Canada
and the
European
community
showed a decreasing trend except for fluctuation. In the beginning, Canadian and
European
communities were lower, but they outraced
Australia
in the end. ‏In 1985, The
wheat
exports
of
Australia
accounted for nearly 16% .
Australia
’s rate rose slightly throughout the period, exceeding the
European
Community
in Mid-1985 and 1986. The blue line continued to drop moderately until 1987,
then
It reached its lowest
point
at about 1290 in 1990. In 1985, The
wheat
exports
of
Canada
and the
European
community
were 199% and 17%. Respectively.
Canada
's
exports
increased considerably around 25% in 1988, and hitting a low
point
of about 1690 in 1989. The green line continued to climb rapidly until it reached its highest
point
at almost 19% in 1990 .
Similarly
, The
European
community
Fell modestly by about 1790 in 1985, and
then
It rose slightly to approximately 15% in 1987. During 1987 and 1988, the green line remained steady until it reached its highest
point
at almost 19% in 1990.
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