Write about the following topic: Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Every human on
this
planet need
to Change the verb form
needs
work
to survive. However
, many people whole of their life do
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whole lives
work
which they do not enjoy or don't have the
expertiseCorrect article usage
apply
.
In Change preposition
in.
this
essay we will discuss the reason why this
happens and also
the outcome of it.
Every human is created with different
mindset so they have different liking and choices of Add an article
a different
work
. Some like to teach, other
like to be Fix the agreement mistake
others
doctor
and so everyone loves to Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
work
in various professions. But
it is estimated that more than 80 Percent of people are doing that Correct word choice
However
work
which
they don't like or Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
work
in which they do not have expertise. The first and foremost reason could be the circumstances which forced him to do work
which does not wish to do. To illustrate, Recently, I met a child who was working in my neighbour's house. I talked to him and he told me he wanted to be a doctor but he is working here in labour as his father expired last
year and he has to feed his family. Secondly
, lack of opportunities is another reason. There are lakhs of students preparing for competitive exam
like IAS we have Fix the agreement mistake
exams
limited
number Correct article usage
a limited
for
seats. So, Change preposition
of
remaining
Correct article usage
the remaining
student
will have to Fix the agreement mistake
students
work
in profession
they don't prefer working.
Every action has some sort of consequences. Correct article usage
a profession
Similarly
, working at your unwanted place also
have
. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Lack
of enthusiasm can be one for them. Correct article usage
A lack
Moreover
, you will not be happy at such
workplace
. It will always give Correct article usage
a workplace
u
Correct your spelling
you
sort
of dissatisfaction and Correct article usage
a sort
also
you will not able
to give 100% in that profile. Add a missing verb
be able
For example
, As soon as completed my graduation, I got a job of
Change preposition
in
Testing
profile. Correct article usage
a Testing
However
, I always wanted to work
as a penetration tester. So, I worked there for more than 2 years and that time period was very hectic for me as I was not enjoying doing work
. However
, When I switched my job as a penetration tester, I start
enjoying my Wrong verb form
started
work
and I was rewarded the best employee within 6 months in that company. This
shows that when do work
of your expertise and liking, you put all
your hard Change preposition
in all
work
and you enjoy working that
.
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on that
To conclude
, It is very vital to do that work
which you are passionate about otherwise
, it will be very stressful. Moreover
, you will not be able to enjoy that work
and everything you will pressure
for the Wrong verb form
be pressured
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task achievement
Your introduction sets the context well but needs a stronger thesis statement that explicitly outlines the essay's scope. Make sure to clearly state what will be discussed in the body paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
A more organized structure will improve readability. Consider following a consistent pattern, such as 'reason and example' followed by 'consequence and example', for each body paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Work on your transitions between sentences and paragraphs. Use linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your arguments smoothly.
task achievement
You have included relevant and specific examples, which add depth and authenticity to your arguments.
task achievement
Your essay covers both the reasons why people end up in jobs they don't like and the consequences, showing a balanced response to the prompt.
coherence cohesion
The supporting main points in your paragraphs are strong. You provide logical explanations and real-life examples to support your ideas.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.