Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's way of life. Other believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Yes, I do agree on the

both

satatment given by the question some

people

believe that

climate

has the

effect

people

way

of life and other believe that the ecomony of the

region

had the greatestes

effect

. In

this

eassy is am going to talk about

both

and give my opinion. Yes, the

climate

does the

effect

the

people

way

to live and take time to adapte the

climate

in the sorrunding.

For example

: In Nepal there are three geography himalaya

mountain

and

terai

region

. In

this

three

region

the

people

have the different

way

of living and

way

to survive.

For example

: In himalays the

climate

will be the in negative deagree and the pepole will wear warm cloth and go wake up late at aroug 8 or 9 o clock. In

mountain

region

tha the

climate

moderate either more cold or hot they will have regular life style. In

terai

region

it is too hot in so the

people

have different

way

to live like they wear half shirt or vest to prevent from hot etc.

This

stament i given is from my country geography structure. I

also

agree on the economy of the

region

has the greatest

effect

. In my pov ( Point of view) that in Nepal it has more

effect

in econmoy. In nepal there three types of

region

himalya

mountain

and

terai

region

For example

: In himalya

region

the

people

can earn by only doing farming and exporting the good to other country or the provison. In

mountain

region

there more ways to earn and have many side hustles to make money from the

both

region

this

region

have the high economy that have more money. In

terai

region

people

can only earn through farm and doing the labour work in factory. In

terai

region

theri are many factory so and have many land so they can use to grow crops and sell it. At

last

that I sould agree sttongly with the

both

statment that

climate

effect

the life of

people

and economy have the greatest

effect

. So, in the eassy I have given my opinion. The

both

statements have

both

pros and corns.

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You have attempted to provide relevant examples to support your points, which is good.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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