Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: •explain what happened •describe the bag and its contents •say what you would like them to do about this problem.
Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
I am writing regarding the Capitalize word
Madam
bag
I left in
a Change preposition
on
plane
. I flew from Vilnius airport to London on September 13th. During this
flight
I left my little black Add a comma
flight,
bag
on the plane
and I did not realize it until I reached the hotel and needed a passport which was in my bag
.
As I do not have my essential documents I would kindly ask you to look for my bag
in
the Change preposition
on
plane
and inform me if you find it by answering to
Change preposition
apply
this
letter. It is a really small black bag
with golden details on it. There should be my passport, keys, plane
tickets and a phone charger. I was sitting in the A1 seat near the window.
I would really appreciate it if you check
the Wrong verb form
checked
plane
and inform
me about my lost Wrong verb form
informed
bag
.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by oimigle on
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task achievement
Your letter could benefit from a bit more detail on the bag's location within the plane, such as 'under the seat' or 'in the overhead compartment.'
task achievement
Consider adding a clear request for action, like asking for confirmation of receipt of this letter or an estimated timeline for their search. This reinforces the urgency and ensures better communication.
coherence cohesion
Your closing is appropriate but adding a contact method (like a phone number) might make it easier for the airline to reach you quickly.
suitable writing tone
Your letter is polite and maintains a suitable tone throughout, which is important for formal communication.
logical structure
The structure of your letter is clear and logical, which enhances readability.
complete response
You managed to succinctly include all necessary details, making your request clear and complete.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite