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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The below graph illustrates the statistics of the film
production
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 from the year 2007 to 2009 in five different
countries
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.
Overall
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,
country
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 A and
country
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 B together have contributed more than 50% of the total films in those years rather than other
countries
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.
However
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, we are able to observe that the film
production
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 in
country
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 A decreased in the year 2009 to 80
whereas
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country
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 B is producing more and more movies
according to
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 the data given over these years.
In addition
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, A similar trend is followed by
countries
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 D and E but at a minuscule level as compared to
countries
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 A and B. Except for
country
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 A other
countries
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 have made progress in the
production
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 of films after year 2009. With substantially lower output,
countries
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 C, D, and E were responsible for a lower number of film
production
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, countries, country with synonyms.
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