The chart compares in 1968 and in 2018, the spending of families in one country how they spent their weekly income
The chart compares 1968 and in 2018, the spending of families in one country how they spent their weekly
income
Overall
, eight things have changed in fifty years for example
spending on food increased by two times and housing has increased by two times too
As the chart illustrates, spending on food was 35% of weekly income
in 1968 but it immediately decreased to 17% in 2018 and housing was 10% of weekly income
in 1968 and it increased by 2 times up to 20% next one is Fuel and power, it was 7% in 1968 but it decreased to 4% in 2018. Clothing and footwear were 10% of weekly income
in 1968 and it decreased to 5% of weekly income
in 2018 household goods were 8% of weekly income
and it didn’t change in 2018. Personal goods were 8% of weekly income
in 1968 and it fell to 4% in 2018.The spending on transport was 8% of weekly income
in 1968 and it increased to 14% finally
, the spending on leisure was 9% but it increased to 22% in 2018.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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