The graphs below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opend in the one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the
number
of closed shops
and new shops
in certain country
from 2011 to 2018.
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Overall
, it can be seen that many shops
were opened at the beginning and its opening rate decreased substantially over the period. While
, closing rate is slightly decline, making its number
higher compared to new shops
at the
end
.
In 2011, The number
of shop closures was relatively low accounted
for 6,200 and increased gradually reaching its peak at above 7,000 in 2013 before Wrong verb form
accounting
dropped
drastically to roughly 500 by 2015, followed by a significant rise to approximately 5,000. Its figure remained consistent at the same Wrong verb form
dropping
number
till the end
. In comparison, by 2011, a large number
of owners opened their shop, accounting for 8,500 but the number
of opening shops
showed a considerable decrease in the next year to 4,000, which is still
remained constant till 2017, with a minimal fluctuation to 6,000 in 2014, after that it dropped to 3,000 in the Verb problem
apply
end
.
In conclusion, both the number
of opening
and closed Wrong verb form
opened
shops
were
Verb problem
apply
decline
, but in the Wrong verb form
declined
end
, people were tend
to Change the verb form
tended
closed
their Change the verb
close
shop
more than Fix the agreement mistake
shops
opened
Wrong verb form
open
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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