The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
The diagrams illustrate the percentage of graduates in six different categories in a particular country between 1980 and 2008.
Overall
, all of the graduated fields mentioned had figures that fluctuated over nearly three decades except first
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first-degree
degree
science
and master sciences aspects. While
graduates’ masters
art, Change to a genitive case
master's
masters'
PhD
arts
and PhD
science
fields gradually rose over the years, the number
of graduates who completed first
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first-degree
degree
arts
plummeted in this
time frame.
In 1998, around 12% of students graduated with the
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a
masters
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master's
masters'
art
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of art
degree
and this
number
increased slightly by 1% after 28 years. With the
similar upward trend, the Correct article usage
a
number
of students who graduated PhD
arts
and PhD
science
fields soared by 5% and 17% respectively.
According to
other aspects mentioned, around 14% decreased among graduates who finished Correct pronoun usage
their first
first
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first-degree
degree
arts
study, this
number
declined from 25% to 11% over three decades. Meanwhile, the percentage of first
Add a hyphen
first-degree
degree
science
and master science
graduation
had a stable tendency in turn 19% and 29% in the time frame of Replace the word
graduates
two
periods mentioned.Correct article usage
the two
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