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The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.

The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
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The diagrams illustrate the percentage of graduates in six different categories in a particular country between 1980 and 2008.
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, all of the graduated fields mentioned had figures that fluctuated over nearly three decades except
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first
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degree
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science
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 and master sciences aspects.
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 graduates’
masters
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master's
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 art,
PhD
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arts
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 and
PhD
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science
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 fields gradually rose over the years, the
number
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 of graduates who completed
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first
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first-degree
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degree
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arts
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 plummeted in
this
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 time frame. In 1998, around 12% of students graduated with
the
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a
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masters
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master's
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art
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of art
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degree
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 and
this
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number
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 increased slightly by 1% after 28 years. With
the
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 similar upward trend, the
number
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 of students who graduated
PhD
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arts
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 and
PhD
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science
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 fields soared by 5% and 17% respectively.
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 other aspects mentioned, around 14% decreased among graduates who finished
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their first
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first
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first-degree
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degree
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arts
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 study,
this
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number
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 declined from 25% to 11% over three decades. Meanwhile, the percentage of
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first
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first-degree
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degree
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science
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 and master
science
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graduation
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graduates
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 had a stable tendency in turn 19% and 29% in the time frame of
two
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the two
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 periods mentioned.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words first, degree, science, phd, arts, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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