The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the average ratio of school students learning to play four various
music
instruments namely piano , guitar , drums and Replace the word
musical
violin
in the year
2005 , 2010 and 2015.
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years
Overall
, the most significant feature is that the maximum number was recorded for children who learned to play piano and guitar in the year
2015 however
at the same time the minimum percentage was for violin
learners.
In the year
2005 , the popularity of learnring
to play music with instruments was very weak most of the proportion Correct your spelling
learning
were
around 10 % and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
blelow
Correct your spelling
low
while
the
following next 5 years the Change preposition
in the
piano
and Correct quantifier usage
number of piano
guitars
total learners increased remarkably by Fix the agreement mistake
guitar
a
double Correct article usage
apply
in contrast
the figures of
kids who learned Change preposition
for
violin
and drums remained the same.
On the other hand
, In the year
2015 , theaverage
percentage of pion and guitar players recorded at their highest Correct your spelling
the average
number
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numbers
approximately
39% and 40% respectively Change preposition
at approximately
whereas
violin
get
the lowest favourite instrument to be learned by children at 5% Verb problem
was
in addition
drums was
not a lovable music tools for students and percentages were about 7%.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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Vocabulary: Replace the words violin, year with synonyms.
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