The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000.
The column graph gives clear data about the distances travelled by one individual in a week (in kilometres) by using a
bicycle
, motorbike, aeroplane, bus
, and rail in the UK in 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, British citizens prefer to travel by bus
more than bicycle
. Besides
that, the train comes as a second option for them.
First of all, according to
the year 1990, people obtained bus
as the best type of transportation with 40 Km
followed by 38 Km
by the railway. Whereas
the lowest distances travelled per person per week was plane with no more than 1KM. Then
followed by 3% and 4 KM
of using bicycle
and Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
motorbike
( respectively). Fix the agreement mistake
motorbikes
Secondly
, in 2000, the residents of the UK still loved the bus
as a great vehicle to travel with approximately 42KM while
the lowest choice was the bicycle
with just one per person in 7 days. In addition
, the next category was motorbikes and airplanes
with about 2KM and Change the spelling
aeroplanes
KM
respectively. Nevertheless
, the train station became a second favourite section of vans.
In conclusion, the areas travelled per person in terms of 5 types of transport in the UK witnessed overall
110 Correct article usage
an overall
KM
in 2000 while
100KM
in 1990.Correct your spelling
100
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