Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, an increasing number of people have migrated from their hometowns to bigger

cities

for seeking

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employments

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employment

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. Some people agree with

this

action,

however

, others may not

on

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the same wavelength. From my perspective, I would contend that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits of moving away from these employees’ intimate folks and

friends

. Moving to more prosperous

cities

is a reasonable way to earn more money. In general, the same professions

of

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the capital

cities

are always paid more than the remote areas, even though in the same nation. To illustrate, in Taiwan, there are a large

amount

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of individuals moving away from rural

cities

to the

capitals

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capital

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,

such

as Taipei.

Due to

the competitive

labor

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markets in Taipei, there are many opportunities to be employed.

In addition

, payments of each working hierarchy are

also

higher than those

remote

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in remote

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places.

Nevertheless

, because of the greater

jobs’

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payments, the commodity prices of capital

cities

always excel

those

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of rural areas.

That is

to say, costly alimony is necessary to live in major

cities

.

However

, those who hold different opinions might argue that without being accompanied by families and

friends

, those who dwell in distinct places, may feel lonely and sentimental, or even worse, may gain

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problems.

For instance

, Dreaming of

the

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high-payment

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high-paying

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employment, many individuals leave their hometowns to a rather prosperous city, Taipei.

However

,

due to

the absence of their intimate folks and

friends

, they might have no approach to release their sense of missing.

Therefore

,

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may cause some psychological diseases, which lead them to

unhealthy

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life. Nothing can be compared with close relationships. In conclusion, I would maintain that the deficiencies outweigh the benefits of moving away from families and

friends

for employment. Because folks and

friends

are important

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healthy

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and joyful life,

although

some people may not see eye in eye with me on

this

matter.