Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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A lot of employed individuals are diagnosed with health issues because of lack of exercise especially during the working day or in their leisure
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is the growing concern of many
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nowadays,
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have to
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. There could be many reasons why these
people
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chose
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to neglect doing exercises, getting too tired from the job or perhaps not finding enough
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, nowadays companies expect their employees to work for extended hours during the day in order to get
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. So these
people
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spend more hours in the office, which consumes their power and
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them with no
time
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for going gym.
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, some individuals can become lazy after returning back to their house from work because of their comfort zone. One possible solution to
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problem could be having
gym
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a gym
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at
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the workplace area. Many companies offer fitness
centre
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at the workplace to their employees in order to keep them fit. Another solution could be
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to encourage
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them through awareness programs, showing them how not doing exercise can lead to health diseases.
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, sitting on
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a chair
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for
long
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time
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while
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doing work can cause
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back pain
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which later on leads to permanent cracks in the spinal cord.
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kind of information should be shared with
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and make them aware of these threads.
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, working individuals decide to neglect exercise because they
tends
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to get tired or can find no
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besides
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and
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they get lazy after coming home.
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,
by
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apply
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providing awareness among these
people
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by passing on the data how dangerous it would be to be unhealthy and
as well as
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making
gym
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a gym
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at the
workpalce
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workplace
may help to solve
this
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problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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