The pie chart shows the percentage of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while the bar graph shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while the bar graph shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
percentage provides key information about the world's global
carbon
dioxide
, it
also
shows a number of countries that have the majority of
carbon
dioxide
pollution. The bar graph shows the most emitting countries in the year 2015.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that China and the United States
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nearly 50 per cent of all the global CO2
emissions
. And on the other statistic, it is obvious that Saudi Arabia has the most CO2
emissions
per person in the entire world, and comes before KSA, the United States, Australia, and Canada with a similar level of
emissions
. In terms of India, and China, we can see that they do not have massive
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per capita unlike Saudi Arabia, China and India
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with huge populations, and
that is
why we can't find them in the list of countries with the highest number of
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person.
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