The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.
The bar graphs show the number of the various types of recycled
materials
, such
as paper, glass, tins, and garden
wastes
, between the years
2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the amount
of collected wastes
increased from 2011 to 2015 for all types of Fix the agreement mistake
waste
the
Correct article usage
apply
materials
, while
garden
wastes
recycled
at the smallest Add a missing verb
were recycled
amount
for all the years
.
57 tonnes
of paper was collected in 2011, and there was a resurgence with 70 tonnes
in 2015 after deceding
to 40 Correct your spelling
decreasing
tonnes
in 2013. The amount
of collected glass had small changes at
the range of 40 and 52 Change preposition
in
tonnes
between the years
2011 and 2015.
Tins and garden
wastes
had the least
proportion of the total Correct word choice
lowest
wastes
with 35 Fix the agreement mistake
waste
tonnes
and 32 tonnes
respectively in 2011. Both of
tins and Change preposition
apply
garden
materials
had the same pattern through the years
and finally
rose with a small increase to 39 tonnes
and 35 tonnes
respectively in 2015. The highest amount
of the collected materials
sent to recycling
centre was in 2015 for all the types.
.Correct article usage
the recycling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words materials, garden, wastes, years, amount, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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