The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.

The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.
The bar graphs show the number of the various types of recycled
materials
,
such
as paper, glass, tins, and
garden
wastes
, between the
years
2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the
amount
of collected
wastes
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increased from 2011 to 2015 for all types of
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materials
,
while
garden
wastes
recycled
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at the smallest
amount
for all the
years
. 57
tonnes
of paper was collected in 2011, and there was a resurgence with 70
tonnes
in 2015 after
deceding
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decreasing
to 40
tonnes
in 2013. The
amount
of collected glass had small changes
at
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the range of 40 and 52
tonnes
between the
years
2011 and 2015. Tins and
garden
wastes
had the
least
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proportion of the total
wastes
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with 35
tonnes
and 32
tonnes
respectively in 2011. Both
of
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tins and
garden
materials
had the same pattern through the
years
and
finally
rose with a small increase to 39
tonnes
and 35
tonnes
respectively in 2015. The highest
amount
of the collected
materials
sent to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre was in 2015 for all the types. .
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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