the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010

The following chart illustrates the proportion of regular physical

activity

done by

men

and

woman

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divided into six categories of ages in Australia in 2010. At first glance, it is evident that the percentage of

activity

in females older than 24

years

old was higher than

males

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in males

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older than 24

years

old. Another interesting point is that both genders had almost the same rate of

activity

at the age of 65 and over with only

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percent

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of

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the difference

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. Looking at the details, 15 to

24 year old

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men

did more exercise

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to women at that

ages

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age

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.

In contrast

, at the age of 25 to 64

years

old, the

men

were nowhere near as active as women.

Finally

, 15 to 24

years

old women had the lowest proportion of physical

activity

with only 47.7

percent

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,

while

men

's

activity

at the age of 35 to 44 hit the trough of 39.5

percent

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.