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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
compares
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compare
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 the structure of a public library in a
20 years
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20-year
 period.
Overall
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, it is
noticable
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noticeable
 that no items were kept, everything was replaced and rearranged. Compared to 20 years ago, there has been the appearance of some new services,
such
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 as café and self-service machines. Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that there were two pairs of tables and chairs in the
central
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centre
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 of
library
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the library
a library
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 in the past. Currently, there is no longer present, it can be seen an
addtion
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addition
 of two
sofa
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sofas
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 on the northwest. It is the place for storytelling and children's fiction
books
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, which
was
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were
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 replaced
from
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by
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 CDs, videos and computer games.
In
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On
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 the
opposite
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other hand
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, children's book was demolished in order to build a new lecture room. Adult fiction
books
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in
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apply
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20 years ago were repurposed for all
refence
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reference
books
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. Next to
this
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 area is
computer
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a computer
the computer
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 room, which was relocated from the northwest corner to the south-north side. The new services
is
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are
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 the café and self-service machines
is
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apply
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placed in the remaining area, the southeast side. Adult non-fiction
books
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 now are changed to fiction ones with
information
Correct article usage
an information
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 desk.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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