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The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
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the chart
is demonstrating
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demonstrates
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 the
electricity
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production
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 and
consumption
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 across 10 counties throughout
year
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the year
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 2014.
this
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chrart
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chart
 has
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a ranking
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ranking
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ranked
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between
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of
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 10 counties comparing
production
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 and
consumption
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 in billion kWh
unit
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units
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 where
china
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China
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 is the
highiest
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highest
 producer of
electricity
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 among the 10 counties
while
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korea
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Korea
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 rep is the lowest. there is a dramatic
production
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 and
consumption
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on
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of
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electricity
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 from
china
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China
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 and
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the unitied
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unitied
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united
 states
comparing
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compared
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 to the other listed
contries
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countries
. it is worth
to mention
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mentioning
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 that
germany
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Germany
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 is the only
contry
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country
 with a
consumption
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 higher than
thier
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their
production
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comparing
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compared
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 to all other
countiries
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countries
 where they produce
electricity
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 more than they consume.
on the other hand
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, the
highiest
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highest
 gap between
production
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 and
consuption
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consumption
 is within
united
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the united
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 states with 4,099 billion kWh in
production
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comparing
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compared
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 to 3,866
billon
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billion
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 kWh in
consuption
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consumption
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hour (MWh)
  • capacity
  • output
  • distribution
  • consumption
  • production
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • trend
  • pattern
  • discrepancy
  • regional
  • anomaly
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