Write about the following topic. The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Because of the massive use of

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cares

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cars

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among the British

population

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it has been predicted that in

year

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the year

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2000 there will be approximately 29 million cars in the

country

. There is an argue the right

way

to deal with

this

crises

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is

introduce

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individuals to other ways of

transportations

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transportation

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additionally

international rules should be created in order to control the

people

who own the car and the

way

that they use them.

However

, I completely agree with

this

opinion for two reasons.

Firstly

, the main reason is that with the use of cars exciding the climate of the

country

would be in danger. To explain, When the number of vehicles

increase

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the unclean gas which

contain

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a huge amount of carbon

dioxcid

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dioxide

will

increase

in

this

way

, the air will be polluted.

Additionally

,

citizens

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citizens'

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health will be endangered.

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, my aunt had a problem with

birthing

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last

year and the reason for her illness was that her lungs

did

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not

bare

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bear

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the amount of polluted air

has been

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received, so the doctor as a solution

for

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to

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her problem suggested that it was better for her to move to a place which is less crowded and has

more

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clean environment. When I

talk

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to her

last

week she was feeling so better and her illness was completely cured.

Secondly

, if the number of vehicles

increase

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in the

country

the roads will be crowded followed by that

people

will be

enoyed

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enjoyed

annoyed

by the sound of the cars horning day and night and it will affect their

mentall

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mental

health over the year. Most of the individuals will be

pationtless

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passionless

, they will have

hedacs

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headaches

heads

and other problems which will affect

the

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society .

Thus

, they will spread the negative vibe to each other consistently in

this

the

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society will be

effected

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affected

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negatively and the

country

will be full

mentally

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of mentally

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sike

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sick

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people

.

To conclude

, if the

increase

of

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in

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the

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vehicles

do

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not get controlled and

people

do not learn an alternative

way

for

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of

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the

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transportation, they will suffer

mentally

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mental

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and physical health issues and the

country

will have a lot of problems to deal

with

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regard to their citizens.