The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
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Because of the massive use of
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cares
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cars
population
it has been predicted that in Add a comma
population,
year
2000 there will be approximately 29 million cars in the Change the article
the year
country
. There is an argue the right Use synonyms
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transportations
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international rules should be created in order to control the Linking Words
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who own the car and the Use synonyms
way
that they use them. Use synonyms
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increase
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increases
contain
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dioxide
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way
, the air will be polluted. Use synonyms
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citizens
health will be endangered. Change noun form
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last
week she was feeling so better and her illness was completely cured.
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country
the roads will be crowded followed by that Use synonyms
people
will be Use synonyms
enoyed
by the sound of the cars horning day and night and it will affect their Correct your spelling
enjoyed
annoyed
mentall
health over the year. Most of the individuals will be Correct your spelling
mental
pationtless
, they will have Correct your spelling
passionless
hedacs
and other problems which will affect Correct your spelling
headaches
heads
the
society . Correct article usage
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Thus
, they will spread the negative vibe to each other consistently in Linking Words
this
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the
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effected
negatively and the Correct your spelling
affected
country
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mentally
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sike
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sick
people
.
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