The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the map
demonistrates
the possible three locations of Correct your spelling
demonstrates
leisure
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the leisure
center
.
the Change the spelling
centre
location
A is an indutrial
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industrial
area
where a river crossover and accessable
through main roads. Correct your spelling
accessible
however
, the area
is more to have pollution due to
manufactrers
smokes.
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manufacturers
the
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apply
location
B considered as
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a
residintial
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residential
area
with prefect
access through main car roads Correct your spelling
perfect
as well as
river
seine. it is worth mentioning that Correct article usage
the river
population
is high in Correct article usage
the population
this
region due to
nearby residents building. on the other hand
, location
C is locatated
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located
on
north Change preposition
in
west
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northwest
area
of the city with forest
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a forest
area
that will provide relaxing
and and Correct article usage
a relaxing
convenint
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convenient
area
as leisure
center.
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a leisure
as
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In
conclution
, Correct your spelling
conclusion
location
C is the most sutable
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suitable
area
for leisure
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a leisure
center
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centre
due to
the relaxing vibes that can be provided in the area
with easy accessabilities
among Correct your spelling
accessibilities
access abilities
location
A and B.Fix the agreement mistake
locations
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