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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the map
demonistrates
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demonstrates
 the possible three locations of
leisure
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the leisure
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center
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centre
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. the
location
 A is an
indutrial
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industrial
area
 where a river crossover and
accessable
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accessible
 through main roads.
however
, the
area
 is more to have pollution
due to
manufactrers
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manufacturers
 smokes.
the
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apply
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location
 B considered
as
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a
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residintial
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residential
area
 with
prefect
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perfect
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 access through main car roads
as well as
river
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the river
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 seine. it is worth mentioning that
population
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the population
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 is high in
this
 region
due to
 nearby residents building.
on the other hand
,
location
 C is
locatated
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located
on
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in
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 north
west
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northwest
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area
 of the city with
forest
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a forest
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area
 that will provide
relaxing
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a relaxing
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 and and
convenint
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convenient
area
 as
leisure
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a leisure
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 center.
as
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In
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conclution
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conclusion
,
location
 C is the most
sutable
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suitable
area
 for
leisure
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a leisure
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center
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centre
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due to
 the relaxing vibes that can be provided in the
area
 with easy
accessabilities
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accessibilities
access abilities
 among
location
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locations
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 A and B.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • prospective
  • recreational facilities
  • infrastructure
  • proximity
  • pedestrian access
  • public transport links
  • green spaces
  • commercial area
  • residential zone
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • feasibility
  • demographics
  • footfall
  • zoning regulations
  • land use
  • catchment area
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