Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our

society

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society,

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we can face many

people

that have different preferences relating to jobs.

While

people

consider that it is better to work in the same places for a long time, others suggest that collaborating with different organizations is

productivel

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productive

productively

.From my perspective,it is more beneficial for a person to be involved in diverse companies as

one

enhance

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enhances

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technique and

broaden

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experience. On the

one

hand,being stuck in

one

job from the beginning of their employment, can boost prosperity in their occupation and give a sense of confidence.

Also

,during a certain period of time

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employees adjust to the environment and implement the work with less stress.

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,

in

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apply

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a

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they

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adapted and professional

in

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their workspace,

due to

the hard-working during

years

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.

Although

this

approach can result in acquiring a sense of security and confidence,having

stagnant

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a stagnant

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lifestyle can be monotonous.

On the other hand

,working with different organizations can enrich a person's observation and lead to being multiple developed.Communicating with

people

possessing distinguished characters and dealing with

the

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new tasks can build up flexibility.

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,

for

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apply

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laborers

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labourers

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who occasionally change workplaces assist them to adapt

any

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to any

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kind of innovations and become

an expertise

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employee

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employees

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.

Consequently

,

people

who advocate

this

lifestyle are more nimble and have a comprehensive approach.

To sum up

,it depends on each individual and its comfort.Either

one

or multiple places for employment can contain complexities and result in certain consequences,the main point is to implement assignments productively.