The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
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chart illustrates the Linking Words
number
of people attending five different activities from 2000 to 2020.
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number
of participants in the film club was the highest and remained relatively stable over the period. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, no one went to musical performances by 2005, but afterwards, it rose gradually by 2020. Whilst amateur dramatics showed a drastic increase after 2010, table tennis declined significantly until 2020. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of individuals in martial arts fluctuated slightly between 2000 and 2010.
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number
of Film clubs saw an oscillation between around 60 and 65 over the period. It peaked at nearly 65 in 2020. Use synonyms
Likewise
, martial arts varied slowly between almost 30 and 35 from 2000 to 2020. Linking Words
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the
musical performance was flat at zero by 2005; Correct article usage
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however
, it rose gradually from 2005 onward and it was approximately 15 in 2020.
The Linking Words
number
of Amateur dramatics experienced a sharp decline after 2010 and it reached almost 5 in 2020. Use synonyms
In contrast
, from 2010 onward, table tennis made a massive jump and peaked at almost 50 in 2020.Linking Words
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