The table below illustrates information about age, average income of a person and population that is below the poverty line in California, Utal, and Florida.
The chart below shows the average salary of the individual and population
that is
below the poverty line in three cities which are California
, Utah
and Florida
.
Overall
, ages
under 18 are similar in number between California
and Florida
, and Utah
has a high rate
of camper, too. However
, the ages
over 60 in the three cities have different numbers each other; the average income in California
and Florida
is almost the same, but Utah
is under them in rate
, shortly, the population of each city has different percentages.
To begin
with, for ages
under 18, Florida
has the lowest rate
, which is 16%, but it also
has the highest number of ages
over 60, which is 23%. California
represents 17% of ages
under 18 and 13% of ages
over 60, and that leads to Utah
, which has the highest rate
of ages
under 18 with 28% and, ages
over 60 became the lowest with just 8%.
Finally
, the average income per person in California
is 23k, and the closest to the number is Florida
with 22k, in Utah
, 17k per person, the population below, starting with California
is 16%, and 9% for Utah
, eventually 12% to Florida
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