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The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map
is describing
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describes
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 the
devolepment
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development
developments
 that
have
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has
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 been in Chorlewood
city
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City
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 between the
year
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years
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of
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1868 and 1994. There
where
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have been
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diffrenet
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different
devolempents
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developments
has been
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since the
year
of
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1868 , as
its
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it
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shown
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shows
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 that there
was
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were
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 only main roads,
park
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a park
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 and
Golf
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a Golf
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 Course in the
year
of
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1868 without anything else , on the
hand
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other hand
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 if we
see
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look at
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 the
year
of
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1994
Railway's
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railways
Railway
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has
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been established and
bulit
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built
 in 1909 . between the
year
of
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1883 to
1922
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1922,
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 there
were
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was
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 only a Chorleywood station but
at
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in
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 the
year
of
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apply
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1922 there was a big
devolepment
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development
 as they started to
have
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build and
stablish
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establish
 a service area for people, and in the
year
of
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1970 the
Motorway's
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Motorway
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has been
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was
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 built. In conclusion, the
devolepment
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development
 has been over the years until
the
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1994
where
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when
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 there was a huge
diffrence
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difference
comparing
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compared
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 to the
year
of
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apply
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1968.
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