The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The table illustrates the three sources of
fund
for police in Britain in 2017 and 2018 Fix the agreement mistake
funds
while
the pie chart compares its spending in the same years. Linking Words
Overall
, the amount of money increased Linking Words
slighlty
for a year, most of which came from the national government. Correct your spelling
slightly
Also
, the primary area of the investment is salaries for officers and staff Linking Words
although
it tended to decline gradually Linking Words
in contrast
to technology with a small rise.
Starting Linking Words
to
the table, the total budget increased from 304.7 million to 318. 6 million Change preposition
from
euros
from 2017 to 2018. The money primarily came from the government with over 175 million Use synonyms
euros
and more than Use synonyms
91million
Correct your spelling
91 million
euros
were collected in the form of local taxes. Use synonyms
Furthemore
, about 38 Correct your spelling
Furthermore
milion
Correct your spelling
million
euros
came from other sources. Use synonyms
Finally
, the amount of investment from all sources is slightly higher in 2018 than in 2017.
Turning to the pie chart, most of the money was distributed to individual salaries with 75% in 2017, which reduced to 69% in 2018. Linking Words
However
, technology shows an opposite trend as it demonstrated a sharp increase from 8% to 14%. Regarding the spending on building and transport, it remained stable at 17%, being a more dominant area than technology.Linking Words
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