The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide information about the percentage of
sales
in the online shop for retail parts in Canada over a five-year period.
overall
, At the beginning of the period, Electronics and Appliance contributed the highest segment to the online sales
for retail sectors , while
video games was
the smallest part. In comparison, Change the verb form
were
at the end
of the period, Electronics and Appliance became the largest retail sector was made by and the lowest contribution was home furnishings.
In 2005, the Video games sector accounted for 18% of online sales
and experienced a more than one-fold increase in 2010. Food and beverage was 22% in 2005 and grew significantly to 32% in 2010.
In 2005, Electronics and Appliance made up 35% of online sales
and showed decreasing moderately by 5% in 2010. However
, Home Furnishings was 25% in 2005, but it went down slightly by 10% in 2010.Submitted by 13788542 on
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