The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.
The pie chart illustrates where
energy
is used in a typical Australian household and the table gives information about the amount of electricity
used according to
the number
of occupants
.
Overall
, the pie chart provides that Heating and Cooling used energy
more than others. The table demonstrates the number
of 6 and more used more in the house.
For example
, Heating and Cooling used 38 per cent
, whereas
Stand-by power used only 3 per cent
of energy
. After Heating and Cooling followed by Water Heating, which used 25 per cent
. Furthermore
, there are other things such
as: Other appliances (16 per cent
), Lighting (7 per cent
), Freezers (7 per cent
), Cooking (4 per cent
). The number
6 and more used 12000-16000 amount of electricity
, which means the biggest use, although
the occupants
of number
one used 5000-6500 amount of electricity
. Moreover
, there is also
occupants
of numbers two and three, which used 6000-8000 and 7500-10000.
It is clear where energy
in used more and less in a typical Australian Household and which group of occupants
used electricity
more and less.Submitted by dnm.best on
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