Write about the following topic: Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Big cities are not able to provide

house

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houses

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to all

people

living there as

lot

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a lot

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of

people

are relocating from the rural areas to the urban areas. Local authorities think that

this

issue can be resolved by allocating

parks

lands

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land

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for

building

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the building

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of new

house

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houses

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. I firmly disagree with

this

as

parks

are the

places

where

people

can

go

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apply

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relax and can feel the beauty of nature.

Therefore

, they need to be preserved and other

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need to be considered to resolve

this

issue. Nowadays, we see lots of

people

, relocating to big cities to find employment for them or to do their

further

studies and for other reasons

also

.

Due to

this

, there is

scarcity

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a scarcity

the scarcity

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of houses. In big

cities

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cities,

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we have

limited

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a limited

the limited

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number of

parks

, where we can sit and relax and where

child

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children

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can come and play.

Parks

are

places

which

shows

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you the true beauty of nature and

environment

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the environment

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as we can see trees, plants etc and these things

makes

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us feel happy. To illustrate,

places

like Bangalore have lots of population living there so destroying

parks

and making

places

for other

people

who want house is not a recommended solution. We can use longstanding structures

to

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which can be renovated for building houses. Unused factories and

building

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buildings

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can be repurposed to create

flat

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flats

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and

apartment

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apartments

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for those who are waiting for housing.

This

also

applies to old derelict houses and schools. In

this

way, there are many

places

which can contribute

in

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to

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building

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the building

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of abodes.

To conclude

, I think there are avenues to consider before reassigning

park

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the park

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for housing. We can use unused

building

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buildings

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for

this

purpose

instead

of

parks

which

provides

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provide

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number

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a number

the number

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of

benefit

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benefits

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to everyone living in society.